Idhau: You were pretty straight forward  could of had a couple of good ones, you also had failed attempts. overall I'm not mad cause yours was easier to read. Like you keep shit consistent and i can flind the flow.

Rapirate: The Mike, Progressive and Fire Cracker line did it for me. Other than that your writtens are hard to follow. 

FV LIKE ALWAYS

ya ok

Idaho your opener started out good ..but after that it seemed like just rhymes with no real meaning behind it....your concepts should come to life thru your rhymes..and not seemed forced..you got the basic idea of how to rap down just work on punches and deliver them with bang...

Rapirate is my winner bcuz he has a better understanding of how this works...concept, set up, punch & delivery..most punches fell flat for me tho, try to think outside the box   When it comes to delivering ya punches.. cuz if reworded u could have sum heaters.

Really good battle on both sides if there were an even option i would definately drop that but there has to be 1 winner after re-reading 3 times i'm gonna go with Rapirate 

fairs in keep grinding