Light work for mckiller, supreme work on your punches focus more on attacking the oppponent and you'll go far

the first battler didn't punch at all and the second did all right and that's what it pretty much came down to you for me

Conceptually one was much stronger.  You couldn't predict what the next line or rhyme was going to be either, so kudos to originality here.  The multiple syllable rhymes were on point and the verse read very smooth.  Respect the fair vote, Supreme, hmu if you want lessons or whatnot, I have some tutorials and training threads in my crew forums. 

Supreme King- I can see a little something in your flow. Its not that bad..fill your bar and take some shots homie.

mckiller187-better delivery, structure, and edge on multies. Clear winner here.

Both send me 8 tho frfr

"They'll sound spanish like spain" Is upsetting. 

This was very one sided. One showed no creativity at all, although the rhyming was good, so gotta give em credit on that. The other didnt perform as good as he usually does, but brought enough to secure the W here. Fashion statement line was nice lol. You usually got nice openers. Votes in.