Typo: canrc-  can't

WALK ALL THE way up like Fat Joe

Expo: up to par- up to pa(as in dad/father)

Fat Joe sang all the way up

Off topic- Offtopik

not a bad effort from the winner showing better structure concepts actually punching hard with some nice set ups which resulted in some success with flow and multi syllable ryhming. the loser tried i can see so read some other battles and see where your at and how you can improve from here .

Looks Like Some Irish Dude Told You How To Do Better Multies. I Hope That When You Said "If hes bored of swimming" You Were Referring To The Victim Struggling In Their Own Blood. Either Way, You Could Have Fleshed That One Out More (...). Verse Sounded Cool Though.

PhayveeWRLD, For Your father Punch To Work You Were Missing Two Things. Par Doesn't Sound Like Pa [Pah], And The Setup Should Have Been 'never been up to par' Rather Than Your never been 'up to par'. never been 'up to par'. Nevertheless, An Ok Verse Without Much Thought In Execution.

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ima go for the one who had the wordplay here and the overall better concept of a battle rap verse.. winner was far too strong here yO