Key Reckless showed him how we do in the Chi  Oki was too simple and short. This wasnt close at all lol #ChicagoStandup

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Both have a lot of work to do with their craff. Oki: Need you fill up your box, battle writing is different from song writing. Key: Not bad. Both of you should read the battles of people such as Manhattan, Lockhart etc to get a better understanding of how to srtucture your pieces. Fairs in, i'm out. 

both need desperatly to learn the fundamentals it might help to develop a winning style anyways, the winner for me filled up the box apart from that this could be an even bout

Ok Good Battle..

Oki- alright, for next time.. when you do these battles.. fill up the whole Box more with Bars, and try to make your words stand out,..maybe have more bars that aren't  just one Liners,.. it seemed like a friendly sparring session,cuz for some reason you Rapped about eating chicken..and tried to Rhyme chicken with Eaten?..it was very simple and not enough Rhymes, to combat , in my opinion..you should keep trying..

Key- i feel you were better but you were also simple.. rhyming the Lame with Fame then Lame again..Plus we need them Punchlines,... that are built up with metaphores..but this is a Good first battle from both of yall..