i may or may not drop on this ionoe.  i gotta eat and fuck my bitch but afterword i might get it

"My Lines drive right over his catchers mitt"= In Baseball a line drive is when the ball is hit hard and kinda low but high enough that the shortstop and basemen usually dont catch it.       "Smoked like kush but he cant take these bars"= His crew name is Kush and Barz. And I said my rhymes od so he cant take these bars also referring to like Xanax bars

And a Life alert is a device old people can wear around their neck with a button thet can press for when they need help

Lol ok then lets go.

40 Killa had more clever lines. He was punching more at his opponent. That's the point to the battle. Filler is destrimental to a rapper. OG has potential but 40 just fileted him lol... Just being honest. Oh try to throw more punches that make people feel like her got hit personally. You'll get better and better. 

Cerb: Opening bar's first multi set is one syllable more than the two following after it & isn't really a hard hitting punch. The speed dial line, conceptually might of had potential but needed better execution. Expecting was another missed oppotunity for a punch, bar serves more as filler. Bunk beds was aiight. Don't know why 'souvenirs for decapitations' is capped though... isn't a multi with anything else. The slug line is a jab. Cashier concept wasn't bad. Ending didn't hit imo. Overall: Have seen better from you, putting this down to ring rust. 

40: Opening was a slick concept, execution was lacking slightly but you have a better opening than Cerb had. Next few pieces are just filler. Your multis are off here, frauds, they hard, kush, bars. Same with the 'a barber' & 'chopper'. Ya gotta keep an eye on your multis, man. Again, you're capping words that aren't rhyming with anything here: Catching it, Lines Drive, Catchers Mit... the first and third rhyme but the 'lines drive' in the middle doesn't. This trend carrys on throughout your piece. Overall: You've a lot of work to do in order to perfect your game. Show some signs of potentially having potential but need to really work on your structre, rhythm and fluidity in your bars as well as your mutlis. one and two syllable multis aren't hard to do. 

Fairs in, i'm out. 

It's faggot ass bombed my battle by giving me a 1 when I clearly 1 it. We all know your a straight bitch. I sent you a battle verse pussy. Don't be scared your supposed to be an OG... Just cause I voted for 40 on this one. 

Good feedback fuel

That last comment was for that WANNABEE  OG FAGGOT

OG you fucking pussy drop your verse bitch

both were evenly matched in concepts and punches and delivery both displayed original vocabularies and flow unfortunately the winner took this with more complex multi syllable rhyming both guys are dope and should keep working to elevate.