Rapirate, you are improving a lot bro.  Your concepts and multies are really starting to come together.  The other has a lot to learn about the structure here.  The FV is in

Rapirate: Not a bad drop here. Conceptually, you had some good pieces though they also needed a little bit more work to garnish their full potential. Thriller in Minila good of done with including Manny Pacquiao. ending bar was pretty cool though. Props. Big: You need to work on your actual writing & wording. Also, focus on punches and concepts rather than cypher style 'bars', man. I'd advise to read other peoples battles such as: Manhattan, Lockhart, RULE etc... to get a better understanding of how to structure your bars better and how to approach a battle. Fairs in, fellas. 

Rapirate takes this on for complexity and scheme but alot of his punches were hella reaches thoughh

Kripp needs to be a little more creative and unique

Can u guys take a look at my latest battle and give m e feedback it was against Jmbswagger