All in all, 1 guy wasn't directing his verse to his opponent while the other did & then some..this battle was solid 

Respect the fair vote or fuck off.  I dont care either way if you respect the fair vote or you fuck off. You can respect it AND fuck off

SinaCog - If this wasn't a rap battle this would be the best verse I've ever read. What the fuck is going on hahaha you kill yourself, you have three heads, four  heads, you kill god, you are god. Incredible. Nothing rhymes tho. 

Nightcrawler - Well you have rhymes so you win. I'd try and work on your formatting so its a bit easier to read, but I like your creativity. Some good lines here otherwise, like the Lucy Pinder one. 

SQUAMMY

They were both not bad,..in terms of writing, but for a battle one really brought nothing..This is why i voted this way..

Sinacog- i voted his way because your rhymes came off like an Incantation or a spell..it was like a Demons Soliloqui,..that was basically just you describing that you were a demon and all the thing's you've done.. This isn't what a Rap battle is.. You have a pretty Decent presentation,.. but other than that.. You didn't even say anyting..and you said "Biblical Beast" and "Biblical Scripture" so many times.. and then you added Ton's of "Airquotes".. for what?..and thing's didn't rhyme..if you added some Rhymes..and aimed your lines at your oponent i would've voted more favorably or even for you..

Crawler-i felt like you were better than your oponentmainly because you came to battle, you talked to him/her..and were aggressive ,but you Had Cap's where thing's shouldn't have Been Capped,.. Highlighted in other area's,..and it seemed like you were stringing words..but not phrases.. where i think you should.. that builds up the punchline, don't just say word's that you feel rhyme..in a row..because alot of the things you thought rhymed... didn't..Foreign Babes?.. Porno Tapes?..no... Orange Aid rhymes more than Porno Tapes..Four Inch-Door Hinge.. this rhymes with Foreign..

i hope this helps you become better..read other battles to get a better understanding of how the wining formula is.. as far as Presentation.