Rapirate had more advanced multi schemes, clearer punches and filled the box more. Jonah, there are two things you need to work on from this. First and foremost, don't use line breaks at all, try to fill up the whole box like Rapirate did here and to CAPITALISE the words that rhyme. Second, although you had some interesting double entendres you have to make sure they actually make clear sense – for instance, I don't really see what "clinging to Roman numerals" actually means or why it's a diss, so try to word it in a way that makes more sense both ways you can think about it.

Good battle!

Christian Jonah: 4 / Rapirate: 5

Mkay, Noobish Verse But I See What You're Trying To Do There. Another Noobish Verse, Very Predictable, Albeit More Refined, Puns.

This was a good read, but my vote goes to Rapirate. While jonah's vocabulary was oddly impressive and unique, his bars didn't connect because his rhymes were off in multiple places, didn't have punchlines, nor did he structure his verse well. Rapirate was better in all of those categories, plus he had more content in his box.

The FV is in sirs.  Smooth multiple syllable rhymes and a few metas and jabs overall was enough to pick up the W.  Jonah had a smooth SOUNDING verse, he just needs some multies and punchlines to be better conceptually to be a monster.

This battle was deceiving Jonah IV line was sick af, even though his structure his off his 3 punchline were hard and far more creative than Rapirate. Rapirate obviously filled the box and had his fair of punches. I'm picking Rapirate by a close margin because he filled the box but Jonah had better punches and would of taken this W if he wrote his 8 lines imo 

Yo Jonah. whats good my guy. Your piece had potential. I feel like your missing so much more. try to fill it up next time. The Alphabet line with Roman Numerals, Jammed camera? Those lines Could have been your moments.

Yo, Rapirate had that body bag line which was a good set up. The school bars are alright. The Pepsi line was your finisher. The set up needed playing with.

Christian Jonah, I can see some creativity in your writing but the way you wrote your verse isn't going to fly on here. You could learn from your opponent here, in terms of the setup-punch structure he used. Gotta be clearer with that. Rapirate, not the best verse I've seen but it got the job done. I like the soft more line. Fair's in.

Mutilators!!