Y'all both did ya thing. I see a round 2 in the future an I'll bet Kai can take the W. No h8 on Offtopik your flow is fire, Kai gonna have to work hard if trying to get that W from you.

Meant to say Susan Storm* fucking typo

Whats up. Im always down for a rematch. Good shit regardless. lets see how it plays out.

OFFTOPIK - The multis in the first half of your verse were pretty killer, and the rest of the verse wasn't bad by any means but it wasn't quite as smooth. Phantom in shoes/ famine I use is a fuckin sick rhyme. Child abuse/wild excuse is even sicker. Dig the style man. Kairos 000 - Lots of character and flash here in addition to solid multis. Dig the Susan Storm punchline. It's a good example of what you're doing right here. Batpism of fire/ mannerism of myers is stretching it and a good example of what to avoid in the future. The idea is good but the execution leaves a bit to be desired. Still, you did enuff before that point to lock it in. Kairos 000 gets this one for me in a VERY close battle. Your rhyming quality was pretty evenly matched, but the the extra bit of emphasis and imagery gets Karios the W. Dope writing from both. Mad props guys. 

The FV is in fellas. One was more lyrical overall with better multi syllable rhymes and metas, conceptually it was enough. 

TRIPPS gave great advice btw.  Offtopik had multies in the first half of the verse but not the last. I see hella potential if he could get a mentor he would be a monster 

"Dosing in and out with his PROSAIC WRITTENS, In n Out how I PROPANE this GRILLIN. "He aimed for the stars" and had a "SuperNOVA FINISH". He'll beg the nurse," please put me out this misery!" refusing the O BLOOD SYRINGES like a JEHOVA's WITNESS!! Scorch him so bad when they EXHUME his CORPSE, fumes will shoot from his UNIFORM! Him a ladies man? He flirts with SUSAM STORMS in TRANLUSCENT FORMS!! (Invisible) Bring him a PASTOR n CHOIR, about to have this "washed up writer" another BAPTISM OF FIRE. His comeback will be"