Killer with a clear victory here. Better grasp on basic punchline execution and far more advanced from a rhyming standpoint. Manix has a lot of room for improvement. Getting structure,wording and rhyming right is essential before you even get into more advanced stuff. Keep it basic then build on it. 

i think this shit was here itself - 

what you POST IS A LOSS, take NOTE IM A BOSS, no 'peter venkman', but you'll end up a GHOST IN THE BOX /and thanks for using up that concept now i gotta throw mine away the fuck.

i think there was too much of a skill gap between the two here and MC killer was way ahead f his opponent here esp with those wuhan and ghostbuster bars. 

The fv is in. One came stronger conceptually with metas, punches etc and maintained great multi syllable rhymes and decent vocab.  Respect the fair. I have battles that wont close due to lack of votes

MC: nice rhymes and flow was on point. subject matter was clean. If you work on your punchlines and get your metaphors to really make people go "damn that was dope" you'll be in an amazing spot one day.

Man: good start for a beginner. Get your rhyming syllable patters up (most of your rhymes are about 2 syllables.) try to work in some punchlines too. if you guys want to read some of the best of the best battlers our right now check out the tournament section. great examples of championship caliber bars. fairs in MC gets my vote for better disses, flow, and rhyming. good battle guys keep grinding

Damn, saw this late. Good shit