Meant to say carole baskin sorry about that I would have corrected it if I had seen it sooner have fun guys 

first rap where i wasnt high because im taking a t break lol so yall probably wont see me on here much i think i actually did pretty shitty this time lol 

You Killed it I give respect where respect is due I never new a blaze could be burned two but be warned we're though.

keep up the good work high or not your good man you kill anything you spit about you can only get better with practice and time your doing great man from what I have seen and hurd you do 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

I meant to say where not through in my last comment sorry I hate doing this on my stupid phone I either need a new one or I need to get a laptop lmao 😕🙃😂🤣🤔👽💯💯💯

lol thanks bro you did great too i liked yours 

Both need to formulate punchlines, make jokes in your raps instead of just trying to rhyme, put just a little thought, its text, you're not on the spot, just take your time and try to craft more clever lines and CAP THE WORDS THAT RHYME, and use multisyllable words..rhyming Cat and Hat is a good way to get DEMOLISHED verses a better MC.

Both of you need to work on your structure, punches, schemework, and flow. Pretty much everything. I have David taking this because his verse actually rhymed all the way through.

yeah i think im done with text battles lmfao im doing audio from now on cause that rhymed the whole way through.

i think need to start capping their rhymes,i got only taking this cuz he atleast did one even though there was no rhyming sylables for it, fair vote n just keep practici ng guys.

thanks for the advice guys much love 

Nice battle but both battlers need to work on the quality of punches, which should not be a problem with proper preparation. The easiest to write punches even though cheap at times, would be to choose idioms and doing some wordplay with them. David Blaze takes the win because he didn't break flow and with a proper cadence his verse could sound dope asf 

i think ORWH had more of a diss to his verse, where as david was just hittin' a cypher here. both need to work on creating punches. 

Awful battle. shitty I wasted my time reading it.  Use punchlines and multiple syllable rhymes. God damn.  The fair is in

Both was light. Feel both should rhyme and have some type of bar in there lines. First mc was coo just felt need more creativity and lines to go with the flow other than that you have the ability to be on the stage as a battle rapper. The loser wasnt really attacking, more so  repeating the opponents bars. Ok battle both can be better no hate.