This was a pretty one sided affiar here. one has work to do to improve. Other was on some DaDDiO-esq shit. Fairs in, fellas. 

Thanks for the advice 🙏💯👽

David blaze made no real attempt at creating any sort of punchline let alone any attempts at structuring his verse either. His rhyme schemes were super weak to the point where they were practically non existent and the only this thing opponent accomplished here was filling the box and being somewhat direct.

RickyLahey made more of an attempt at structuring his bars as the responder utilized setups within his content here to allow for better delivery as well incorporating multiple syllables in his rhymes to which I believe was his strong suit here. Akin to his opponent he failed to really come up with any punchline except for in his closer but it was pretty weak, however, the consistency of higher caliber rhymes compacted into hard-hitting shots is what took this battle here.

For you to say that I maid no real attempt to create a punchline and that my rhyme schemes are week is odd to me when I said stuff like 

any one could get hit with the fire I spit while ya choking harder than ya girl did on my dick

You can either talk shit in style and that sounds good sometimes or can you actually rap/freestyle and rhyme on spot an come up with actual good lyrics that rhyme 

David, your rhyming needs improving, also maybe cap the rhymes or make them bold because it's hard to find the flow of your verse. You barely had any punches in your verse until you said "choke harder than your girl did on my dick" <-paraphrasing. Maybe include more lines like that, because even though it's very simple, it still counts as a punch, and you need those to win. Ricky your rhyming was great here, the whole verse flowed very well. Your closing bar was my fav from your verse. Good work.

Kinda of late, but David work on pauses and if your gonna do single syllables punches thy have to be flawless and even then most voters don't like single syllable drops. And there was alot of filler you used "shit" like 3 or 4 times.

Ok thanks for your advice I'll take everything in 

This was a good battle I think Ricky took this W tho.. wish rick could of hit me with bars like those.  But he's not ready for the set up like POP SMOKE.