urching-to impel force

Rick astley just waxed this dudes ballsack with duct tape.......................................................

^ your rating doesn't reflect that.  Seems like i barely edged him with that rating? i shoulda got like an 8 bruh c'mon don't be fucking stupid

STFU or get slapped while your handcuffed 

^ bitch send me a battle and let's get it then.  i won't even flip anything you say. battle or stfu dicksnot

Thats it, therhinoman won 10-1...Castle will send your faggot ass a very meaty 8 later....

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ ;   <<< castles bout to beat the shit out this dude

You claimin' "ya dump da clips?" but u aint a MAJOR HOLSTER WITH THE GATS, MAN! coz "da only time u do dat" is throwin' PAPER HOLDERS IN THE TRASH CAN.^^ thino this was a neat concept but ur set up amde no sense try to accentuate your concepts with more coherent and relevant set ups and you did be solid.

ricky the sun/son shit is way too played out man other than i think u had the better punches here coz they were set up more cleaner and landed but were not too hard while most of rhino's suffered i execution. Rhino you gotta stop doing too many opens and start tounrye/direct battles to start using more personal punches.

Rhino - You had some good moments here, i liked the culture vulture bar, it wasn't bad and the dump clips was your best bar, however I didn't really care for your opener and your closer wasn't it either, i thought you weren't consistent here. And you also had forced wp in your closer.

Ricky-  Your rhyming was great, you definitely had the more creative verse. The ambush a star was the best bar in this battle if you ask me. Didn't really care for the set up though, sun/son is super played, you could've set it up in a better way. The "saying im great with more battles lost than won" was a cool little line nothing creative about it but still effective. 

I got Ricky taking this. Fairs in.

TBH RhinoMan I didn't understand a good part of your verse and the wording was pretty poor throughout. I've pointed this out many times before, but if a phrase would be nonsense when spoken, why does it automatically get to make sense when written down? A couple of your ideas were alright, but it was just incredibly painful to read.  For RickeyLahey I do have a lot of appreciation that your verse didn't fall into any of these traps, which are annoyingly common on LB. I  thought your verse started alright concept wise, but the last half of the verse seemed phoned in as fuck.  I think the scores might be generous. 

im sort of drained im gonna take a break from battles a bit and goin g on a cypher