Easy victory for Obey here. Overall better verse as Troy wasn't rhyming consistently. Lots of his lines didn't make a whole lot of sense tbh. 

ahhh, didnt have space

living in**—good battle! Just realized we're same crew, good luck!

I have Obey taking this. Killa was simply outclassed and outmatched in every category, especially execution. Killa, capping is a technique that helps the reader distinguish certain parts of your bar from others (often used to highlight setups, or multies). Capping a bunch of irrelevent words causes wording and flow issues. That, coupled with your ideas not being developed well OR executed well hurt you here. Fair is in.

Troy: You were rhyming barely one syllable together and sometimes you weren't rhming at all. It seems like you have some ideas ex: harry potter, birthday present. You need to focusing on multi syllable rhyming (rhyming multiples words together) and coming up w/ clear punchlines that work w/ your concept. 

Obey: Took this battle easily. Still birthing stats line was nice. My only critique for you is to make sure you're not so wordy. Less words inbetween multi sets make the flow smooth. Sometimes I can get lost w/ where your flow is in terms of the multis. Fairs in

Ayyyy DEDSECC

Obey just made this dude walk the plank into an ocean of diarrhoea. Straight rammed a pineapple up his ass and started twisting it. Fair vote, no hate 

Cool battle but Obey pubches were far better and more creative.Still birthing line was the killer one for me

Fair vote here.  I judge on multiple syllable rhymes, wordplay, metaphors, vocabulary and punchlines.  One was head and shoulders above here.  Hope to battle you both one day.  Thanks for the read gentleman.

I felt like the first guy had poor structure and wasn't rhyming well throughout his verse and his opponent was and had some pretty decent punches

Killa, your rhyming was sloppy here, punches didn't really do much either, Lmao the harry potter bar was your best moment here and even that didn't really do much but make me laugh. Not a bad verse but you gotta step it up.

Obey your opener was enough to take this, i thought the still birthing statistics bar was dope. Shadow interactions was my fav, I didn't really care for the closer though, set up made the punch really obvious.

Obey got it. Votes in. 

Obey took this one with better punches and delivery,Killa keep working U got mad potential! Work on ya punches and Multie count, rhyme schemes was all over the place..enjoyable read tho'