Rattle: Concepts weren’t executed to their potential. They also lead nowhere quite often. Try ensuring that your set up lines connect with your punchlines. Not bad but not great either. Also adjust your multis, they’re awkward, man. 

Rhino: Similar things can be said for your piece here too. However, you showed more signs of creativity in your bars/thought out side the box more. Still need work on polishing your concepts more. 

Overall: nothing too impressive here, both have work to do for them to elevate, keep at it, fellas. Fairs in, I’m out. 

This was a dope battle. Dope verses from both. I voted for who was stronger conceptually. Smoother rhymes and a clean verse. 

i got bobby ahead here even tho rap had the LOTB with his closer the rest of his verse was so messed up even on multi levels while bobby kept it way too simple with metaphors but surprisingly  clean wording and multis wise esp for the first half of his verse.