ORWIH: Not 'bad' but this isn't a cypher section of mumble rap section, man. You need to approach each battle as jsut that, a battle and dorect your bars towards your opponent, attacking them. Try reading a few battles around the site. AMiz: nothing special here though you done enough to take the win. Keep at it. Fairs in, fellas. 

i wouldnt compare a text battle to mumble rap but i respect your thoughts.

Rap when high did ya thing, ez W. miz your shit was hard to read, 

idk what tf was going on there. Fairs in.

No hate but ORWIH kinds just sounded like he looked up a word in a thesaurus and just puked something together, Amiz (despite the broken english) at least tried to assault the opponenr

im fine with criticism but the fact that you said i didnt think of the rhymes on my own is flat out disrespectful alot of yall have been just looking to see if i called someone a faggot or a bitch and letting actual bars go over yalls heads i guess im just more early 2000s style rap and when i write it on text battles i dont delete it or use backspaces because i think its cheating which alot of you probably dont do so im gonna stick to what im doing fellas thats all im replying to anymore bullshit like that.

(i dont mean to sound like a dick either but one dude already mumbled the shit in his head and called it mumble rap since he thought it was supposed to be mumbled i guess? thats another reason why this shit can be weird its hard to know the flow that person had in their mind and everything this site isnt exactly "ORGANIZED")

(and no hate toward you either ghost i appreciate the honesty but that comment about looking up the words was kinda disrespectful)