Sfghost is growing in this game ..he had done better rhymes and multis ..loser need to be advanced with multis and rhymes  

David: Welcome to LB. Try reading the battles of others of the site. Such as: GOOD GRIEF, Celcius etc.. you'll get a better understanding of how to constuct your bars and how to execute your concepts better. Keep at it, man. 

Ghost: You done enough to take the win here or rather, due to the level of your opponent. Some pretty basic stuff though. Keep at it, you've a way to go for your elevation. Keep it up though. Fairs in, fellas. 

ghost the crayon bit did not work as far as the wordplay goes unless crowns mean crayon too which i'm sure is not the case but correct me if i am wrong. other than fucking impressive here man !!! the finisher write more of those kinda lines throughout ur verse man !! u got fillers here and there but there was a lovely flow to the verse with very well spaced multis this was a very very nice surprise here !! David u got imagery i can tell but u changed ur course way too many times with ur lines leaving almost all of ur ideas underdeveloped and at the mercy of very basic monosyllable rhymes which dnt cut it here. trust me ghost used to do the same and he changed that up in a week lol i trust u did be improving soon too so all the best with that !!

I was raised in Texas and oklahoma where everyone called crayons crowns because if fucked up accents.

Ghost won this easily. He demonstrated better rhyming, scheming, ideas, punches, and overall flow, while David pretty much posted a paragraph of run-on sentences. David, you have to learn how to construct a text verse man, otherwise you'll keep taking L's. Fair is in.