Welcome Arvee. Around here the customary way to write your verse is to fill the entire text box, using punctuation or even a / as a line break. That said, SF's verse was 8 lines of pretty uninspired gay jokes. The fat chicks dancing part was funny but you need more stuff on that level if your whole verse is gonna concentrate on one angle. Arvee was technically better here. His rhyme patterns were more consistent and the structure of his lines made for an easier, smoother read. Rebuttals are part of an open and Arvee was able to effectively flip the gay jokes used against him. If he filled up the box, this would have been super decisive. That said, even with less content than his opponent Arvee inflicted more damage with his rebuttals than SF did with the initial gay jokes so I'm giving this to him. 

This is for Anomal3

ghost just a tip when u writing lines like these - 

.gonna go for my NIGHTLY DRIVE see you walking alone so ima BUMP this GUY back to NINETY FIVE,

avoid capping the words guy and bump and just go with the nightly and ninety ones. it will do wonder to ur structure. You are getting better quick though felt like this was for that gay guy so dunno why u sent it to arvee or whatever u still had the stronger verse while arvee  gotta atleast fill up the box and then work on using multis. which u did have here and there unknowingly i suppose like gayest stuff and lame as fuck. stick to scheming like that more. 

Originally for anomaly, I didnt hold back on the gay lines out of respect for him cuz that's what he asked for.

Only capped BUMP as a slant rhyme for HUNG

I accidentally posted it open because my phone is wack, I actually ment to send this straight to him

Oh. My bad xD I'm new, idk how this shit works. Saw an open battle and took it

Nd bruh, there were multis, you just gotta pronounce it right lmao 

RHYMing SICK

RIDE your DICK

reTIRE QUICK

FIRE DISSes

IRON SHIT

But that's the problem with text battles tho

Sf ghost was more powerful here .he had punches filled box and good rhymes .loser need to add rhymes ..sfghost is going better

Add rhymes? Or lines? Cant do much with an 8 bar limit. Maybe use the enter button correctly so each line is actually counted? You know, like how poems are written