The winner was more aggressive and didn't repeat his rhymes as much as notorious E. It would also help to indicate where you're trying to land a punch or say a multi syllabic rhyme.

those where great lines by DDOLLARS

notorious you were just going on cyhering with very little to choose from in terms of punches and multis throughout your verse man some parts even the coherence suffered gotta work on that man dollar u had similar issues too but had a better grip when it came to dissing ur opponent here comparatively but u gotta work too if u wanna be taken seriously which i am sure you do. all the best to both for their future endeavours.

I felt DDOLLARS took this because his verse was more battle-oriented, and he was repeating the same words (like 'wannabe'). I think you could both improve your readability by letting the readers know where your lines begin and end somehow. People usually do that here by capitalizing their end rhymes, or you can use forward slashes. You both need to up your complexity. DDOLLARS took this for me. Fairs.

EDIT: I felt DDOLLARS took this because his verse was more battle-oriented, and he WASN'T repeating the same words...