Not sure id Dog Pack was spitting a troll verse or was just literally not rhyming anything either way Lihas wins lol

Dog pack-so for starters if you are just starting out, put break in your punches.  Break it up some so I know where Lo es end and begin. Makes for a better read, i will say how ever that you ain't cuss not one time in your rap which I noticed off the back which to me is good. Have to giv it to Lihas for a slightly better flow, word of advise would be start using multis.  

HAHA I'D GET A NICKEL FOR EVERYLINE YOU'D WISH YOU CAN READ BETTER grade A BITCH 

One dude had more vicious wordplay and got thru this win with better punches and a more unique mindset yO

dog pack you forget to rhyme in a lot of places and stretch ur lines way too long too try adding in multis and structure ur verse better with more coherent jabs. Lihas u fell of in ur verse in quite a few places but also had signs of promise which tell me ur actly beginning to grip punch concepts and metaphors a little. the dog and zeus references were nice try to clean up your wording and multis but. Going with Lihas for the better attempt here.