Felt SF took the W here. He had broken multis all over the place and the punches weren't exactly the strongest, but what did hit was better than what M posted. When I say broken multis, I mean the syllable counts in your rhymes don't match up. You were capitalizing parts of words or words in general that didn't rhyme at all, which as a reader, threw me off quite a bit. M you had a lot of really REALLY simple rhymes that were only 1-2 syllables tops. That won't cut it in a battle if your opponent is rhyming anything more than that. Punch wise you weren't exactly strong either much like your opponent, so it was basically a toss up of who I felt had the more impressive rhyming and I gotta edge it to SF for that reason. Fair's in.

shoutout for the pat stay name drop, my favorite rap battler.

Shout out to you. Your bars were dope. It's just, I'm a girl, and I like boys, so it was a little bit off the mark in terms of personals, but I really loved it.

I guess that's what I get for a blind drop tho...what can I say lol..

I mean, I did demand you say I'm the "man" in mine, so I'll allow it.

KILLER BARS I WONDER WINS 

but side note haveing a toke i read what you wrote n its all dope but i lost all hope when i seen the last note for real tho if i was u bro id write no homo bro fo sho 

Thanks, Lock. I might not have the anger (creativity? vocabulary?) for this. I feel like the social interaction wheel of SWTOR is about where my limit of cleverness is at. :x

ghost there is way to do the cuckold angle btw, what u did was way too basic and you capped rhymes which did not rhyme or match syllable wise other than the last word here i'm guessing this was before u truly understood multis. overall a half decent verse tbh while M3 some of ur lines felt poetic and i'm guessing ur not new to writing but new to battling. try using mutlis and better metaphors and u did be alright u have a hint of metaphors here and there here but at a very basic level so keep practicing shit just dnt happen by itself. last name pat name those are the multis u shud have more of they were two syllabled but u gotta be somewhere between 3-5 syllables to be real good without ur wording not getting too messy. going with M3 here for a better attempt at a more meaingful verse and fresher angles.

This was close i guess m3 is new ao i give space for that you nees to cap amd tighten up ur multiz.SF, Your multiz and punches were decent but i think u came light here which is presumptuous in a battle this was a coin toss. Gb both no h8