typo-you make me barf and stuff , coz he aint bein strait withhis raps, 

expo-zack bagins host of ghost adventures in the travel chanbel, Play-Doughe is a clay toy product, Power is a show i think on hbo...ghost is a character there n fans ask who shot ghost.

gl

Ghost- that Kobe line had a good set up in my opinion. Kinda wished you had filled up your box.

rhino- décent lines felt like you came a little harder with punchlines

Fair, to be honest I'm getting used to the format still and not filling up the box was just a mistake out of lack of experience

Ghost: Not a bad flowing piece though there wasn't any punches, the Kobe concept's not that fresh at this stage and certainly needed more work to be executed into a proper punch. Use the entire box though. Stiil: Not bad, keep at it, man. 

Rhino: A little better here than your opponent in terms of having 'punches'/a more battle approach with your bars. Still basic pieces and poor wording choices in a large number of areas. Done what was needed to seal the victory though. Keep at it, man. 

Both have room for improvement but with work and dedication, sure they'll be able to elevate their game. Fairs in. 

Sf was simple. An I like simple,  Rhino was all over the place. Yes I'm familiar with all the references from television but it wasn't done smooth at all. Overall fairs R in.