Clear win for Slim even though that titanium cock line was hella pauseworthy. New man line was pretty good tbh. Bill didn't fill the box or come with material nearly strong enough to put up a fight here. Fair's in.

My winner not only stunned out here by filling the box but his lines was also better here yO.. fairs in gentleman not much to say here

Big manBill's verse at Right Hand Side looks like Ladder .clearly the winner is the Cool who filled the box

BigmanBill:

I'm guessing you're new here and that's why you wrote the way you did, but I'd advise you to fill in the box rather than write them line by line so you get more material crammed in. Basically write your verse like a series of run-on sentences, and CAPITALIZE the end rhymes so people know where your lines begin and end and how its supposed to flow. The first line was a turn off. This site is mostly guys, and nobody wants to hear about your 7-incher unless they're gay. You REALLY need to up the complexity but focus on what I said about filling in the box first. Verse was pretty unimpressive.

Cool Slim C:

You rhymed way better and showed a much better grasp of complexity than your opponent here. The first bar was kinda redundant because you rhymed with DOG 3 times, and the "air bud" metaphor was kinda played because it's been done so many times before. I get psichiatrist/brains in a box, but if I were nitpicky, it sort of doesn't make sense. For the most part, bars were okay, but they were pretty much exclusively gun bars and I would advise switching things up...like have maybe one gun bar and others dissing your opponent from other angles as well. 

This battle was pretty clear-cut. My winner is Cool Slim. Fairs.

Expo not really needed here, but Slim got this off of the mere fact of filling the box. If Big woulda filled the box and had more content, dare I say he might have won this. Fair is in.