Vamp this is the sorta shit u shud write in ever line/ bar - 

He claim he 'usin Semi Autos ' lyke he MIGHT BE HOLDIN' ONE/ but hes only 'Bustin Tech 9s' becuz hes LIKELY BROKEN SOME

clean metaphor, average punch but a punch noentheless with a neat set up.

that stockholm could have been worded better but this shit is miles ahead of the shit u have been writing very good stuff!! 

ethnic cleansing was but use things like those as set up jabs instead of final punches the rhino bit did not work but ur definitely on the right track and should be a force to reckon with in another 2 or 3 battles. NME this was far from ur best prolly underestimated and upcoming dude here, those ICU line had potential to be better but other than that and tsunami surges ur verse wasnt offering much which is why i am leaning with Vamp here.

This was a better showing for Name.. I felt like Rhino came in and took life by the horns here though fellas.. fv yO

Read this a few times, and I have to side with Rhino on this one. I'll start by saying that both of you have dropped better material before so to see the level of what you dropped here was a bit surprising. Rhino, the whole WW2 theme you had going was creative, but it would have translated better if the ideas were better thought-out and harder hitting. A lot of your ideas made sense, but just because you can form an idea and it makes sense doesn't necessarily mean it's a hard hitting punch. Just something to keep in mind. Nme, your drop was simply too basic man. Your rhymes and your multies were too all over the place. I think if you slowwed down and focused on one scheme over a span of 3-4 lines and develop your ideas you'd be golden. Repetitive rhyming and basic multies won't get you very far these days. Vote is in. Good spar.