mighty impressive improvement with the multis from different child here, you gotta work on developing your punch concepts now like how your opponent did here. danny the oryx and porpoise shit went over my head on how u were tryna use it as a punch but the last two bars were more than enough for the battle.

I got DC taking this one. Danny Tanner was just way too ridiculous here. I mean most of the shit was just too bonkers to even begin to make sense. DC was here dropping a standard verse and dropped acceptable jabs that landed him the W here against a well designed but nearly purely nonsensical verse

Danny your rhyming was pretty good. Kind of heaving on 'or' rhyme scheme but I get the gist of what youre trying. That being said I hated your content. But i guess that's the tradeoff of trying to get a consistent rhyme.

DC youre rhymes were basic and you werent saying much of anything lyrically.