One dude brought half the kitchen while the other didn't bring any cooking supplies what so ever.. fairs in boys one was better all around...

IamTheNme, for starters, actually went about filling the entire text box here and structured his verse in a way that's slightly adequate for my battle rap text format standards. There wasn't really any actual set-ups as they just felt forced to me. Perhaps attemping to incorporate some sort of metaphorical writing skills would help more. what you had going on there in your opener was really a simile that you turned into a multi-syllable rhyme which, btw, didn't match up with the second rhyme therefore renderring the multi for your opening line broken. Punchline wise it wasn't bad at all the opener. Although rather weak. If you did have any metaphors in your verse I didn't really notice any mainly due to the lack of punctuation as well as me simply just not understanding them. Nothing should have to be expo'd, of course, but that's because shit should just be straight forward otherwise an expo is needed in which there was none presented here. Also, the punchlines progressively got weaker throughout the rest of his verse. The getting burnt like a cancer stick line was simply WAY too played-out. Although I can say that he easily takes this battle for having better multi-rhymes, especially in regards to his attempts as even though the broken shards of glass that made up his multi's still edged it. Otherwise he remained cosistent at being direct with his opponent. The attempts at multi's and punchlines were also present in this battle. 

 Aganesse's opener was almost purely self-hype as she was addressing mainly herself instead of the opponent but then proceeded by exclaming how she's in some sort of ranking system against her opponent as she's #1 whereas her opponent's #9. I don't believe that even exists & it was also just a really simple and cheezy line, therefore making the "bar" significantly less hard-hitting. The responder also didn't fill the box entirely, barely any sort of formatting except for seperating lines with slashes, made absolutely no attempts at all beyond two-syllable incorporation or setups nor did she display any noticeable punchlines either. Most of her verse was simply self-hype and weird flexing in general. Like how she brags about sucking dick in the end while going about saying she's a lesbian in the forums. I supposed though that she deserves an extra point for the effort (right?) and her rhymes weren't simply just limited to one syllable each. I also see effort in her attemping to end lines with slashes and actually being barely somewhat direct towards her opponent.

I suck dick better than your crusty eyed mom/

^^ not sure if this is the right approach in a battle tho. 

Over all the loser had a few potential ideas with the busta rhymes line but the execution was much too half assed while the porsche lines just str8 up made me pause while NME kept things more smoother with better display of basic and got this one pretty fair and square.