Expo: Fuck your childhood if you don't know what a see and say is and Look up April Fools Yeezys....the picture is the punch. Good luck Vampi rapper

Oh....and....KILLERS

KILLERS. 

KILLERS.

What I’m ‘faced with is more ass’ than if you ‘LOSE TO RIKISHI’

^^LMAOOOOOOO!!!!!!

vamp had one of his best verses here (from what i have read from him) which was nice to see nice clean jabs here and there only problem he had esso in some mood on the other end lol those rikishi and yeezys lines just bodied the battle for me. metaphors, wordplays, wording everything was hard and crisp like old tortillas tbh lol good verses from both respectively just but esso got this fairly easy.

Nice little bout here, fellas. I have Esso taking the win here with stronger punches and fresher concepts that were executed better. Vamp had some ideas but didn’t execute them to their full extent. Thanks for the read. 

Good battle. @esso in my opinion had the stronger punches because his work just seemed more logical to me. definitely shows the work of a more experienced user, creatively executing a series of jabs that strings together effectively. @vamp had a fair attempt of glory choosing to spar with a veteran, he did the best he could do with what tools he had in his arsenal. i really enjoyed the delivery on this one from start to finish, and the punches were decent. but the same effectiveness was just not there. Good luck

Loser had some hit or miss shit here as the beast rolled in.. Esso had his usual punchline base verse here, couple haymakers really landed

cobgratz,Esso gb

Esso had the better rhyme scheme and the more polished verse. Favourite bar of the battle was Esso's closer. good battle

KILLERS! Let's go Esso!

Yo Esso got this one very clearly imo. Vamps first 3 lines didn't really lead to a punch at all and the finishing multi was horribly broken syllable wise. It also made it kind of funny you had a line about having consistency but then your Multi syllable count on that line was inconsistent with the rhyme scheme. Rest of the verse was a bit better and cleaner and I could see ideas and references here and there but again nothing that really turned into an actual punch, save for maybe the closer. It just felt like you kind of tossed out buzzwords and ideas that were somewhat related without regard to what the lines actually mean. I'm not trying to shit on you at all, I know you're new and think you have potential, but there's a lot to get cleaned up. Even take Esso's verse as an example of clean execution and clearly communicated ideas.

Esso was very smooth overall and even his set ups were kind of punches like the easy bake one. See and say and Greta lines hit. Rikishi was funny af. I think the bottom of your verse lost a bit of steam and the yeeZy punch took some time to get to but still hit. From technicals to creativity, Esso was simply a cut above here.