couldve been a long sylable reach at d a end but i wanted to experiment....

Barsz

I'm gonna lean towards vamp as he had better creativity all round here and smoother read, Mcrattle on the other hand what let you down mostly was your stretched and long ass multis which were hard to follow sometimes and took away impact from your lines as they seemed forced. The fair is in

Caked Out ya I feel ya, this was supposed on unranked coz of da poor wording in my 2nd half but i forgot to click it, lol....but thanks fpr da feedback im gonna just do basic medium sylables nextime...and KK i apprechiate ur feedback n vote too.

Damn Rattle really showed out here hate to vote against the dude twice in a row.. his multis and punches are elevating at speeds other dudes can't even touch, and he's only been this good for a couple weeks.. winners opener took this for me. Camp on his vampire shit I love it

vamp ur first three lines were well schemed imo, you should write more lines like and use the same elements in the same way to diss ur opponent instead of a self hhype concept that will really do you wonders. you prettymuch stuck to self hype after tht too but wording and execution and wording wise it did not have a message as clear as ur opener which made it lack luster which was also the case with bobby's first 4 lines and coz u were forcing urself abnormally long multis the wording was getting way to iffy. u basically used 4 lines to say ur opponent folds under pressure and does not hat the skills to win thats basically two lines worth of an idea if not one.the closer was a decent idea but you could have just said he claims to have numerous wins but the "counts" a mystery and flipped it with shorter multis but coz u stretched it the whole thing felt way too scattered again this was only one bar worth of material which was stretched out into 4 lines almost which is what cost you this battle. i am just going with vamp here for having the more clear message in his first three lines.