Crikey. This was interesting.

I think artdizzl3 was actually thinking up more advanced ideas than Bnas, but unfortunately lacked any of the skill or experience necessary to deliver them. Bnas came with a pretty basic, bog-standard verse without any real risks or advanced ideas, but he executed something that was clear and aggressive, and I understood everything he was saying on my read, so he takes home a pretty uninspiring victory here.

Good God this is not a good battle. I had to honestly go with artdizzle here because even though he didn't have punches (neither did, tbh), he didn't have a God awful forced multi like SMASH THE CACTUS VEINS. Wtf are cactus veins? Do you mean roots? Cause a cactus has roots, not veins my guy. Holy shit both need to throw punchlines in their next battle and before y'all say I'm hating just look around at the actual good verses around here and humble yourself. Neither verse is anywhere near the level of what is to be expected out of a good verse. I understand one is relatively new and he has time to learn, but Bnas's performance was unacceptable and he lost the battle fair and square more so than artdizzle won it, imo. Fair is in. Smh @ this battle.

For that intro "Eight, five eights" So dude hit me up in my DM n say something like...send 8 faggot he'll send me 5 diffrent 8's just in case juxtaposed: to place two diffrent things together to compare them

Huuuum being that this wasnt a blind battle and you had almost 5 days to prepare for it i was just assuming you would of came with your A game womp womp wommmmmmp i mean seriously wheres the personality where's the beef the heat your approached this battle like it was a blind j/s

i think both wouldve done better here if they expanded their multi sylables more but thats just my opinion, art got potential but if he balanced put his sylables w better structure it wouldve been even i think, i got bnas takin this for better punches . the 'body body body' was lit bro. fairs in no h8

Save the talking for after the battle dude, let the voters decide the outcome

art, a lot of ur rhymes were not even syllable count wise like the juggernaut ones and alos u kept changing plot before completing one too many times which hurt ur punchlines, gotta develop the concept completely before switcing to the next one whilst ensuring the message/pun in ur rhymes i loud and clear. later in ur verse u had a few lines which were there for rhyming sake only which in other terms are referred to as fillers. so watch that too. Bnas had a few fillers himself as well here but were on a more cleaner level and were often followed up with jabs and the message was pretty clear in what he was tryna say with his disss which is why i'm going with him here.

The winner here just barely got it as he did not bring any real hard punches. But still did enough for the win. Loser was just all over the place and couldn’t match his opponent. The fair is in 

I liked arts style a little bit more than bnas but it was a close battle overall. Hope to see improvement

Ty for all the feedback hey nas i dropped you another 8 get at it homie

the winner had in my eyes a more complex concept, and was better in flow had harder better set up punches, loser has a dope drop here also mad respect keep elevating yo