KILLERS.

patholigists study or 'monitor' disease

petrification refers to terminlogy used in certain types of fossilation processes

K... I thought my loser was nice here but then the winner came in with that long ass multi rhymed open and won this. Both dudes have improved so much it's dope to see

I thought a lot of Rattle's stuff was kinda forced, the schemes were long but they just didn't pack any punch you know? Detrimental did decent, he can be really dope but i just think here you focused more on the multis than the punches connecting and i value each of those in a battle, but i think Detri takes off the last bar alone, that one connected. Good bout gentlemen

bet u consider bein 'pick of the BUNCH' a 'DUNCE hearing FUCKIN SCREAMIN rob's 'DEADLY SPECIAL CUNTS' 'sharp as an arrow' better come hard theres no LUCKIER DREAMIN of DETRI MENTAL HUNTS do u need 'health insurance?' be SUCKY NEEDIN for DEBT FREE DENTAL CLUBS!

flow and multis was pretty much on point man, imma give you that. here is what the issues is - the bar is 3 lines long with the punch only coming in in the second half of the last line while the rest of the lines had nothing to do with the last punch in terms of relevancy or set up and since they were not punchline themselves and only there for rhyme sake kinda made the bar way too basic. also coming to the concepts of the health insurance and debt free dental clubs you did not make your point cearly enough so the punch did not work and also coz conceptually it was obscure. same thing with the bar that followed too which ended with a self hype instead of a punch. you wasting a lot of space with filler bars and just putting in half of the last line of the rhyme scheme for a punch wheras you should actually be setting up the final punch concept or bulding on it instead or use just club two punchlines together with the same rhyme scheme instead but to it's totality for eg - (and this is just off the dome so dnt judge me lol)hope you got health insurance, coz you gonna have bills to PAY AFTER THIS coz these attacks gonna have you breaking down like a BRAKE DANCER BITCH !! (and i think imma use this in some battle now lol)the point is used the same concept with less space, and keep your wording direct, get rid of the fillers and add more quantity of quality lines into ur verse irrespective of however long it takes in the beginning. same with your last bar too which actly was going somewhere deeper conceptually and had potential but ur unclear wording messed it up. trust me if u pull this wording and cutting out the filler bit as well u gonna be a much better emcee man.

Detrimental - nice to see you trying out texts as well, always a good way to go about things and adding more dimensions to ur skills. your opener was a little reach coz u used that unorthodoc wordplay (along with the too many oblique references to remember) to connect the two into a self hype bars which does not work anyway in a battle so you kinda put urself through all of that pain for nothing actly. try to keep it more simplified with only enough complexity like the petrified bar u followed this one up with that was neat, played out concept but neat still and could be better if u could cut down the multi length to keep the wording more natural. the closer was just reaching everywhere and fillerish and did not work and was infact ur worst line in your verse. stick to more of the petrified kinda bars with more natural multis.

Overall i felt both tried to put in their respective efforts but only detrimental managed to almost land with on more than one occassions which is what is making me vote for him here. low and high 5s for both respectively here.