Amiz gets this one in my eyes for making more sense, attacking their opponent more and having marginally better rhyming structure. stopid's verse was more like a cypher, you clearly have potential but you need to check out other battlers on here more to get an idea of what the site writes like.

Pretty straight forward vote here.. one dudes gotta be more mean here man and not talk about the other dude having a venom kiss. Winner did just enough here yO

Amiz much lesser grammar errors from u this time but they were stil there. good attempt at a few multis here and there overall i think since stopid didn;t hold back on rambling randomly imma edge this one to you for atleast having a better glimpse of the basics even thought it was very less. keep working.