H1Z1 made more sense here, because aside from some issues with his punches he was generally getting his point across clearly and structuring his verse to throw punches, whereas DifferentChild had very short and repetitive rhyming which served basically to repeat the same point over again.

H1Z1 I liked a lot of your ideas, but they weren't always executed well enough to land the punch hard. For instance, Organ/Oregon wordplay just doesn't work for me since organ has 2 syllables and Oregon has 3. "two holes in his Oregon" is also just a really weird way of phrasing that side of the meaning. I didn't really get your closer or think the wordplay worked either, but I thought the Street Fighter line was the punch of the battle and one of the best I've seen from you, it left me thinking "why didn't I think of that?" because it's simple yet really nice. It would have been nice to see you go beyond a 3-syllable scheme for your whole verse though, the opener started well with 5 but dropping back to 3 really weakened you here.

DC, you struggled with being too simple both in terms of ideas and execution. Ideas-wise, it seemed like half your verse was just differen't rephrasings of "he's gay!", which is a weak enough 'insult' by itself, but gets super-weak when its just repeated over and over in different ways. Execution-wise your multis had a couple of issues, you broke up one of thm (YOU WANNA WIN/TOO I'm GOING IN), don't do that again because it kills the flow. Your opening multi seemed a little unnatural and forced to fit the rhyme, "with scars type mack" doesn't really sound right. The "gruesome like Freddy" bar was probably your best and was pretty nice though.

Overall this was actually an enjoyable battle to read and vote on, I'm just giving a lot of criticism here cos I hope you guys can use it to improve even further.

KOTM

Damn yO I'm basing my winner here off aggression and the wits to keep striking his opponent. Also one was alot more direct here

Melos jersey is 00. Only expo needed i guess. ZLLA 🔥

both were notbad here not great but not bad, H1 best bar was da Idle amputee, DC bb was da scars type smack, i felt one was a a but more basic then thw orher so i have H1 edging this. fair vote.