Thoume you capitalised a lot of stuff and there were rhymes in there, but you didn't really seem to know how to actually cap your multi rhymes, and I think that led to a lot of confusion so your multis didn't fit and your flow was lost. Only capitalise the syllables in the rhyme, and try to have at least 3 syllables at the end of every line that rhyme in order with the 3+ at the end of the next line. You had some 2 syllable rhymes here, which really isn't long enough, and others that seemed to be trying to go longer but just didn't work. Your content was focussed and aggressive, but really lacked structure which I thinkw was mainly due to rhyming issues.

Chodder your opener's rhyming was also all-over the place which was disappointing cos this is normally your strong suit, the syllable counts in the multis didn't match which ws a big issue. After that the rhyming cleaned up and you had the "TH C" punch which was ok, and ultimately enough for you to get the win here.

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I liked the wordplay my winner spit his bars off of here man.. he also seemed like he was spitting the truth.. more believable

not bad , thoume was pretty decent but i chodder was just hard hitting in the response was funny best bar was the knuckles for ya joint plus good nameflip n wp, fairs in .....