Frinzy you had a few basic punches like "sweeter than liptons" and the youtube ads one. However, you needed to fill up the whole box with content for 16 lines instead of using line breaks here, plus capitalise only the words that are rhyming (like Orochi did here for the most part). Keep working at it and try reading up on other verses on the site, just about every tournament verse past the first round should have the format down really well and be an example to move towards if you click "Winter 2020 Text Grand Championship".

Orochi your bars weren't overly strong here but by using proper multis and filling the whole box with a battle-oriented verse you did enough to take a comfortable win.

fans to da critics kno his bars R like youtube adds,"Cnt wait to SKIP IT"

^^this was nice, i kinda liked frinzy's verse, flowed pretty well and smooth. only thing lacking was if u had a few more punchlines and attacks that would have been nice sometimes u just went on rhyming and wasting space, also you need to fill up the box the way orochi did too. overall i think orochi took this one pretty convicingly with the better punches even though some kinda fell flat but mostly fine enough.

I have my winner off the first read here.. he didn't have to come as hard as he usually would, as punchline heavy, as the loser did not fill the box even 

frinzy gotta fill in da box altho u had some capped rhymes most werent more than ione sylabale, orochi filled in da box and was more into it here i like the elsa line. fairs in.

Ok my winner. #Headoff for sure. No mercy. My loser has potential. But not filling your box correctly lose points. A bit all over the place but can tell once he gets the concept. He will be a beast to recon with. Keep at it. Don't let up. #titans