Yue actually came with punches, like the snail closer, slash yo cheese and leaking like a broke hose. Please please please keep writing bars like this. What held you back here was that you didn't have clear rhyming going on. If you start having rhymes with mutliple syllables, and CAPITALISING THEM LIKE THIS or like The Punisherr did in their verse, you could really elevate by miles and leave heaps of the battlers on the site in your dust.

Punisherr won this by having punches that were on the same level as or stronger than Yue's, as well as multis spaced well enough to give a nice flow. Chiropractor and anabolic steroids were your strongest bars. Make sure to go over your lines and double-check them to make sure they make sense though, the whole married-to-the-game bar was worded a bit confusingly and didn't make total sense.

I've got the punisher taking this battle as well.. he had better attempts at punchlines and his wordplay was cleaner yO

Yue? I've got to say man ur level is staying the same and I dont see you taking on board anything people are saying in the comment section battling is about more than just rhyming

... Easy win again.. Yo punisher check to inbox