Once again my winner had better wordplay and more of an attempt at punchlines. Loser can and needs to step it up here real soon yO

i liked the computing and trouble shooting reference by forewordplay there pretty good effort at a metaphor there pretty good effort could have been better but i am not gonna nit pick, however u may wanna avoid repeating the same multi to rhyme three times man thats a no no. yue them efforts are here and there like the artachoke play pretty neat gotta write things like in evry line or two hereon man coz if u leave the rest of ur verse looking the way it is you only digging ur own grave. fairs in.