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I usually don't base battles off multis man but the winner was laying some out that noones seen before guranteed. Loser nice but the winner had an extra jab or two here yO

i got alceo ahead here for being able to make all his set ups transition into a coherent punchline while tongan had a few fillers here and there which worked to his disadvantage and also alceon had the higher highs out of the two as well.decent battle none the less.

Alceon got this one super clear. The sho(w) punch is obviously super played out, but executed well and the salad and beetlejuice punches were pretty good, but again aided by fairly polished execution. Tongan IDK what happened with your shit tbh, the duck tales stone cold line had some potential but was presented super awkward. rest of the punches definitely were flat imo. You also had a bunch of commas everywhere in places where they shouldn't be and it really hurt the readibility because it creates these awkward pauses. For example, This vets stuck with low blows / he's head hunting homos reads a LOT cleaner and naturally than: this, vets, stuck with low bloys / he's head, huntin homos. I mean it just doesn't even make any sense why the commas are there to be frank. I basically had to read the verse a second time pretending the commas didnt exist and it was just super weird.

Long story short, bar for bar Al punched harder here and execution wise he was cleaner so he took this one.

word, i had to edit this one down from 10 bars to 8, i think thats why i lost alot of sting and lost my fluency of it, because i did have to delete characters to try to fit things in, so this created a choppy read. but after 2 days of being challenged, a m/f just throws it out there. thanks for the fair votes guys...keep battling.... @alceon ...next time we go 16.

16 would be nice and never try chopping down a verse to fit the box lol i used to do that and caught a lot of flak for wording issues :p still do but not as much so it's always better to write fresh.

the winner here was just more polished and creative with his concepts and was able to execute his verse fairly hence I’m leaning that way. Loser wasn’t too bad by no stretch just lacked in certain areas. The fair is in