imma go with stryker here for the better attempt and overall more focused verse from a diss point of view. honestly tho i felt like doe put in some efforts too but lost coherency too as most of his ideas were way too scattered.

I've got my winner based off the last line.. both had single syylable multis thru out with very minimal attempts at making them longer. Although one has more wins against the other, one was more direct and kept steadily giving it to his opponent. Fairs in

the winner had better concept of structuring his rhymes and capped the rhyming words, although the loser is improving and would stand out more if he capped his rhymes and focus on attacking his oponent more than creatively rhyming gibberish