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Biblical Super Bowl

H1Z1 (0%)
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Reppin: Chicago, Illinois, United States
TonganKidd (100%) WINNER
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Reppin: Kansas, United States



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Battle started: January 24th 2020 at 02:22
Challenger joined: January 27th 2020 at 06:32


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2020-01-27 06:32:13).

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Kiwi Peewee
<Assassins>
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I don't really understand what "Biblical Super Bowl" entails as battle conditions so I decided not to take that into consideration, my apologies if this played a major factor in either verse.

Ultimately I think TK had clearer punches here. I think H1Z1 might have just been trying to pack too much into every line, and with so many wordplays being forced in everywhere (in soles lent/insolent doesn't work because there's an "s" sound in "in soleent" that isn't in "insolent") as well as a lot of setups that could be a bit unclear (such as in the opener).

H1Z1's best bar was your closer, I thought TK's checkmate bar was bar of the battle though, that was one of the best bars I've seen from you and I really liked it.

Posted on: 2020-01-27 20:44:33 Private Message Kiwi Peewee

PapaLock
<TheHitmen>
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Got Tongan scoring the W here. Think he landed a few more punches here like the Oscars one. H1 your verse had almost zero readability due to you trying to force so many concepts and wordplay. Like how tf does innocent sound like interception? What does that bar even mean to begin with, man? In soles lent/insolent? Huh? Like none of this really makes any sense, tbh. You can do a lot better than this. Fair's in.

Posted on: 2020-01-30 00:04:24 Private Message PapaLock

 
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Edgeworth
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Good little bout. Close one here. Both had a punch or 2 I was liking, but I've got Tongan edging this just because I felt a lot of the wording on h1s wordplays and double meanings kinda fell flat / were a bit off (innocent / intercept, insoles lent/insolent) and as a result Tongan just came off that tad bit cleaner in my eyes. Fairs in boys good to see you both activ again!

Voted: H1Z1 / TonganKidd
Posted on: 2020-01-27 09:45:43 Private Message Edgeworth

H1Z1
<ZLLA>

MY BRO! T MOTHERFUCKIN K! Dude remember when we first started? Lmao big come up since then. 🔥 drop bro.

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Posted on: 2020-01-27 10:22:35 Private Message H1Z1

Bnas
<MvH>

Damn dope shit here real talk H1 definitely stay improving, punches are getting better.. TK been doing everything he can to murder these dudes lately.. fairs in

Voted: H1Z1 / TonganKidd
Posted on: 2020-01-27 10:36:08 Private Message Bnas

Rowdy Punk
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Dedsec!! Cooked that boy!

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Posted on: 2020-01-27 13:55:47 Private Message Rowdy Punk

H1Z1
<ZLLA>

Thanks for that feed back. In working on the area of wordplay now. To incorporate it into my style. It is a weakness I'm still struggling with. The scheme box. I'm figuring that out. Trial and error hahaaa

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Posted on: 2020-01-27 23:21:50 Private Message H1Z1

 

 
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