knyx came with more complex rhyming and better-developed punches which took the win here. Closer was your best punch, but a lot of it felt like filler. kiidy this battle was definitely a big improvement, but to keep improving you need to have rhymes that are 3-4 syllables long and capitalise them, like knyx did here. Your "sucks so much it gave me a blow job" line was the type of line you should be aiming for, with puns and double entendres setting up a punchline, although you need to get the rhyming with multi-syllables down in order for your punches to land with weight.

Knyx had plenty of forced wording in this one like fee knyx and disgusted by spits = dentist for zombies but he was still miles ahead of kiidy who wrote in far too basic of a manner 

Dope battle here. As new as these two new Jack's are, I've gained respect for both of them. They've been grinding it out, trying to improve the best they can. I appreciate that. Salute.. 1hunnid