Actually have kiidy taking this as I feel he mixed in a few more punches than usual and rattle devolved into basically baby speak and came off way too elementary 

One dude got out beat here in almost every circumstance. Dope drop from the winner. Loser needs to step it up a little bit yO.. fairs in gentleman, salute and keep grinding

Winner was more boring but more focused and coherent, the loser's second half turned into pure nonsense even though he was more entertaining. Both need to read battles from the tournament and from guys like Rieper, Edgeworth, and RULE to see examples of good battling. Or check out the current tournament going on. 

Kiidy I feel like I'm dropping the same feedback every battle but you need to get the formatting down. Even if your bars are fire if they're impossible to read there's not a lot I can do. That said these aren't particularly fire. As always I liked the aggression and attempts at similes, and i like the rolex line, this feels like a cypher. 

MCRattle I've seen you do way better than this but I think you know that and took an opportunity to go for rhymes over substance. You're not saying a whole lot here compared to your normal style but you did a whole lot more rhyming and your bars are more cohesive.

I'm not a huge fan of people not trying as hard for what they see as 'easy' open clashes but this is a clear win.

SQUAMMY

both starts of evens by by the end of each of your first verses mcrattle pulls away out rhyming  kiidy, good luck both