One was on another level here and it showed, both dudes had the flow and the wittyness but one came with some creative wordplay that his opponent could not touch nor grasp on'.. fV yO

nice lil duel Rattle ;)

Rattleslines just didn't really have flips to them. Teeth costing a lot like dentistry. Sense/cents I mean cmon Bro. Way too basic. DETRI was much more polished and executed his shit well here 

Detrimental your opener sets the tone for this battle. The multi is a bit forced and not organic at all, but the wordplay and punch are creative and land well. Your bars read best around the 4/5 syllable mark and anything beyond that is kinda muddled so I'd suggest keeping on that. And don't say you'll bring anyone's rectum strife again. Overall a good verse though. 

MCRattle this is a good verse. Similar issues with weird wording e.g. dumb simplicities, but your wordplay and punches are on point all battle. I like the monumentally cool bar. And i'd recommend the same shit to you regarding aiming for 4/5 syllable multis. 

SQUAMMY

My winner here had just a higher level in his bar structure so smoother Punchs all round however it was a good battle and my loser has definitely been upping his levels lately