Jayboikrazy was just clearly ahead here in pretty much every category that matters. Amiz was just writing at a very elementsry level all around and it's clear to see.

Jay Boy came at dude with some harder bars along with better attempts at both punchlines and metaphors.. I have my winner off the first read here yO but you guys should keep trying... Salute for doing so as welL

Jay: Conceptually, you're not bad. Execution however is another thing. Your multi's syllable count is off which kills your bars. Room for improvement, keep at it. 

Amiz: You have a lot of work to do, dude. First: start off with writting properly. Correct grammar etc. Secondly: you have to increase your multi sets and also elaborate on your concepts to garnish a better punch impact from them. Keep at it. 

Overall: nothing major here from either. Both have areas they need to improve in. Jay takes the win here by having the more thought out and better executed concepts than his opponent. Fairs in, i'm out.