Amiz... that thing i told you about to talk to Realnezzz he goes as DizzRepekt or something now, but yeah do it ig u get the right direction now u will be much better than this. you could also speak to Korvus btw. both of yous. overall syllable wise the brothel need and total creed line were the best ones from amiz while all his other multis were not evenly matched up like THOR-NY-AND-SO-UR is 5 syllables while THRO-TTAL-BREED is 3 syllables which is a huge gap! dnt do that while proper had a lot of similar issues with his end rhymes too but they were all either single syllabled or two sylabled which gave the multi game to amiz here for the better effort. And i do not focus on multis much but the content in ur verses lackekd flips so when that happens ur verse gets judged on multis which is like the last thing but also an important one in battles. content wise i think the only half decent flips came from proper here with the hit and a mizz idea.... those are the kinds of things that make good punches if u can understand how to set them up better. the summer line had promise but u did not build on it which was the case with all the other lines that followed after that as for amiz i have told you about ur grammar. i could totally go easy on you and say u had multis but proper had punches but i dnt coz ur closer to my part of the world and i would be real happy to see you do better. things like i dud ur sis total creed have no connection whatsoever and even tho ur rhymes were better the content was just too disoriented - angreji me thoda effort maar idhar ka aadmi log khaa jayega tereko jab tu thoda aage badhne lagega.  sab line me connection and thoda meaning daal. anways goint with proper for the more coherent verse.

My winners getting better with the double syylables, the loser? He needs to work on them.. fairs in gentleman keep trying

Proper grammer: You mostly rhymed with one syllable, which was kind of basic and disappointing. The highlight of your verse for me was when you said "how are you rhyming with a mouth full of JIZZ". That was kinda funny, but other than that, nothing really stood out to me about your verse.

Amiz: You rhymed much better than your opponent, but you also had some wording and coherence issues. Maybe it's they way english is spoken where you're from, but the incoherence really hindered your verse. I would work on that first and then focus on incorporating more complexity.

Felt Amiz got this one. Fairs.