Arrgh! Murder on the high seas! Lindo had some strong energy and conviction but really lacked the fundamentals of a text verse, in future don't use line breaks between your lines, just write and always make sure you fill up the whole box. Also try to have more advanced rhymes with more syllables, see Wackbeird's verse here as an example of what that might look like (his rhymes are CAPITALISED as yours should be).

Wackbeird's bars lacked any real punches but were still enough to take this. I wanted to give a piratically-written vote but it's beyond me. Good shit, keep it up.

Aye, I be makin' some mistakes.

Should be "enCRUSTED WITH RUBIES"

Should be "double EYEPATCHES!"

He's SCHIZO!

Obvious winner here due to the chasm in the amount of content and the quality of it. Wackbeirds drop was very entertaining to read as well. Cool shit. 

Ummmmm... Both dudes should step it up. Loser was pathetic, winner was a tad bit better but not by much. Start working on wordplay both of y'all, please. Also that shit stain line is so over used, and that booty line was just straight up queer, leave that shit out of it man

Lindo you rhymed you with you... With you which is fine if you had more rhymes to cover it but you don't. Bitch, snich, glitch,wil kill still drill, boob noob. That sums up your rhymes next time Just try to fill the box. And it will all Come together. 

Easy win here.. Lindo first thing is fill the box... No hate fv to the captain.................... Nme