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I feel like one was more polished here and had the better verse although I liked a few of my losers lines. Keep grinding it out dukes this site needs more battles like this yO

Neither did a heck of a lot here in way of making a well structured, organized drop with punches. Both were rough reads, but IamTheNme read a little bit better here and made it  a little more sense overall.

Thunder - you have a few lines where your multies dont exactly fit in rhyming wise, with a few wording errors in the first bar or so. But decent punches and decent flow.

Name - you have a few broken multies, including your first multi set. You constantly deviate away from your multie sets which leave bren multies and less impactful punches. Fairs in.