One dude brought the heat while the other brought the wordplay. I felt as if one had the harder bars right out the gate. Winner is untouchable when he on these lines

Pretty easy to call. JJ used 1 and 2 syllable rhymes for a large section which made it seem very elementary and even beyond the rhyming the concepts were just not doing much. Bit of rambling as well. Nyvilly had a couple decent punches and just better structure to take it here.

okay your saying i only used 1 and 2 syllable rhymes when i made sure to add 3 syllables and even have a 5 syllable in mine so should i just stick with 5 syllables because thats really all this guy used where as i used 1-5 syllable words to give it a bigger variety so any pointers to get my rhymes better would be appreciated 

nice lil fade here guys,ii love people getting out of their comfort zone with styles, it's what ii look for, ii feel like too many people force themselves to write the way a lot off the let's beef old heads. Don't get me wrong it's a deadly style they developed. But we need new things!

ii like that y'all have your own style. ii have a winner here with imo some better punching, a lil more of complex verse. Not gonna give any suggestions cause ii feel Like ii said y'all have your own thing going and growing it. As always fairs in.