Oh my god dude your rhymes are sounding really WHITE,there's no need for you to try to battle ,I'm just tryna be POLITE,you sure this is what you want,you should go ahead and put DOWN the MIC,and your like you I said I don't belong with you HERE,your better of in a field somewhere grazing with the DEER,or in your natural habitat with all the fuckin QUEER,I'm sorry am I being to loud well let me make this CLEAR,I don't know where you came from but get the fuck out of HERE,I have no FEAR,WHAT CANT YOU HEAR ? I can drink you under the table with only one gulp of MY BEER,You've been misguided go back to the great FRONTIER,this has been a public service announcement from PROPER GRAMMER

Again. Proper, you should come with lines that are more suited for a battle. All the battles I've seen from you are like a cypher. The other wasn't anything special but did come much more direct towards the opponent. 

Tough one to call but murder had an extra punch or so here so that pretty much took it. Lots of wasted space on both sides that canceled out and the writing level and structure was about even. 

I feel like one was not only more real here but also filled the box which the loser should, infact, do.. fairs in gentleman keep dishing them out trying to get better