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Proper grammer (0%)

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Reppin: United states

M11STRYKER (100%) WINNER

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Reppin: United States

Proper grammer

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<div>And now I'm back at it,I'm like an addict,</div>
<div>I hop up in the booth and take a crack at it,</div>
<div>I spit them bars so hard,I'm like a semi automatic.</div>
<div>Your nothing but a fool so I'll call you Roger rabbit.</div>
<div>Your such a fuckin faggot,a stinking little turd lookin like a maggot.</div>
<div>I'm going to go fucking insane, better put me in a straight jacket.</div>
<div>Imma about to go mid evil and supplex you like I'm William</div>
<div>Regal,I'm just like one of those people I'm really smart and your mind is feeble,ok this is going in awhile entire different direction,you better get pro-tection,I'll burn you so bad I'll cause an in-fection,maybe than you'll listen better when I teach a les-son,by the end I'll have You giving me your con-fession,it must really suck when you have to look at your re-flection,I can say what I'm thinking and leave you guessin,these waters I was stepping in I was just testing,</div>
<div>So now I want to talk about this no longer being a diss.</div>
<div>What if it was a union hold on just picture this.</div>
<div>The two of us could callab and be freinds</div>

M11STRYKER

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<div>I WENT TO RETIRE FOR A MINUTE BUT NOW I GOTTA FACE YOU, all this dayjavo-vo-vo-vo/ I COME WITH A PUNCH TO END YOU/ you really deserve more respect/ MY CHRISTIAN LINES STILL FLEX/ We know you feel like a vex, Sorry I could not get to your text/ TELL WHAT COMES NEXT BIGGER THE BETTER I GUESS??/ I cant really say the rest/ (HAHAHAHA)/ I tried to be really nice/ BUT YOU STILL CLING ON LIKE LICE/ Comin in here eating rice/ Just like Darius Guice/ I guess you can go live your life/ CUZ YOU JUST GOT STABBED WIT A KNIFE/ it explains all of your strife/ IM THE ONE WHO MAKES PEOPLE LAUGH, YOUR THE ONE WHO GETS KICKED IN THE PANTS/ I live with the words in my hand/ YOU LIVE STILL EATING WIT GANTS AND THE ANTS/ I have more potential than Kevin Durant/ YOU HAVE LESS POTENTIAL THAN A GNAT./ What else is there really to say/ MY GOD talk never flies away/ I got my full family/ Served christ so im still here today/ Payed attention im the other 6 grades/ Look at me advancing to 8th/ But you sir still stand in my way/ SITTING THERE LOOKING FOR ONE WHO IS GAY/ All this yet in Jesus name/ I cant tell you how many chances he's gave/ Its why im not yet in the grave/ Praise him for the rest of my days. I guess this rap battle time is up GUYS PLEASE SHOW ME SOME LOVE!!</div>

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Battle started: January 1^st 2020 at 17:17
Challenger joined: January 16^th 2020 at 19:13

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2020-01-16 19:13:31).

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Kiwi Peewee
<Assassins>
Moderator
LBT Champion
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M11STRYKER edged this one simply by filling up the whole box. Proper grammer, you need to stop using line breaks and fill up the whole box. STRYKER, despite capitalising basically half your verse you were still only rhyming about 1 syllable most lines. Only capitalise the syllables actually rhyming in your verse, and try to rhyme more than 1 per line.

Posted on: 2020-01-21 08:17:04

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Bnas
<MvH>

One dude tryed to rhyme harder and he filled the box. I feel like the loser did what he could with what he worked with but he needs to start with filling the box

Voted: Proper grammer / M11STRYKER
Posted on: 2020-01-16 23:32:33

Edgeworth
<LoD>
Concept Champion
Rookie Champion
One Bar Champion
Fair Voters Club

Both went pretty cyphery here for sure which is a big no no and the concepts adn rhyming were basic and weak from both. Going m11's way for having the box filled.

Voted: Proper grammer / M11STRYKER
Posted on: 2020-01-17 02:44:28


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