Nice spar gents. Proper make sure you feel the whole box in future, make the most of the space you have. Felt one was stronger attacking his opponent here. 1/

Jazzy got it clearly. Both basic in concepts and rhyming but PG wrote a cypher vers that didn't fill the box. 

Jazzy had more consistancy in flow. A complete box, and atlease a few broken multies. Too Prop who only had a basic rhyme scheme. Really nothing else.

FV In Fellahs ™

I have one taking this with a better attempt at less than basic punches. The other had attempts but were far from anything advanced. Also had much less material to work with. 

Proper - To start you had plenty more room for writing your verse in that box. There also wasn't a single bar in your verse I would consider a punch and the rhyme scheme was as basic as it gets. Best bet of advice is to hit up the forums & find some of the better battlers verses you enjoy reading to learn from. You definitely have some work to put in to improve. 

Jazzy - Many issues with this verse as well tbh. While you had lines I'd consider punches, in which, your opponent did not. They were also the bare minimum. Rhymes were also as basic as it gets. You need to add some creativity, have transitions into punches. Set ups, etc... Utilize metaphors, nameplays, wordplay, personal if there are any, etc.. 

MVGT: Jazzy - Not a very good verse here from either tbh. Jazzy got my vote for throwing some punches at least. The both of you have some work to put in in order to start improving. Good luck. 

Giving it to propa for staying on track with relatively cohesive thoughts. Rhymes on par with each other, jester just had more